by Doctor_Tease
Love the entire list of submissions, will be keeping an eye on your submissions in the hopes you add another chapter.
I adore the way you set up this story so far, and how the cooperation/mutual suffering is depicted here. You haven't descended into one operating at the expense of the other, but an honest attempt by both girls to overcome their predicament. I found the gag removal to be an especially effective and unexpected touch (also nice to give them dialogue opportunities - my editing side approves!). The whole series is dripping hot but this goes to a new level.
Unbelievable. Leaves me speechless. Best series I read so far. Can't wait for more chapters.
I have just read all 5 chapters and can't wait for another. It's so very HOT!!! Please write more soon.
I have been reading the other chapters over and over (especially Ch. 3 :) and feared you had lost interest or given up! It's GREAT to see another chapter, hotter than those that came before! MORE please?
Your feedback, as always, is what keeps me writing. I'm glad you all seem to be enjoying this return trip as much as I have! Next chapter it's back to Emma and Katie.
Awesome awesome awesome. That machine is a work of devious genius but I'm sure it would do serious damage going in so far as to lift them off the ground then hammer them. Is it trying to find a path to her nose? I so hope you keep this series going!
Maybe you shouldn't be so damn shaming towards people and their kinks. I'm a woman and I loved this story. It's FANTASY. And perhaps you should learn to be quiet if you have nothing nice to say.
I thought the story was incredibly well written, dynamic and interesting. Huge turn on for me, I loved it!
I'm reading this in a public place, and I drew stares as I started blushing. .....
I really liked the chapter, but I am afraid I cant really picture the seesaw thing in my mind, which is a shame. I wish there was a drawing to go along with t
his chapter^^
How you managed to imagine up such a devious contraption is mindblowing! Once again you impressed me with your writing and creative skills! This story is very hot!