by hopeulikeit
Certainly has a hetero-female focus; the details of which are dead-on. Wicked Amy should reconsider being friends with Jackie, she may learn a thing or two. The end is fantastic. Poor guy. The descriptions of the environment, positioning of characters, and facial expressions are very well done.
I always enjoy female protagonists with a take-charge attitude... almost as much as I enjoy male characters who are compliant without being simpering and spineless. Bravo on a job well done.
Women in charge <)) I liked the way the story was described, the expressions of the characters, excellent. Poor Chad, feel sorry for the guy <)) Good job, keep it up.
you need to start making sequels!
i would LOVE to hear about what happens tomorrow night!
pleeeease?
B xxx