by TFC
1000+++++++++ what a great way to twist a story i cant wait for the next part to be posted by far the best story i have ever read so far keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!! "jakk"
This took me down a path I wasn't expecting. I was on the edge of my seat reading this part. Now on to part 4
My ex-sis-in-law knows I write and read erotica. She calls it "that porn shit". Ignorance really must be total fucking bliss I guess. If she could read, it is a story like this that would make her eat her own shit. She is an "ex" and that suits me just fine.
I can wait for the rest. The writing is good and you wrote it for a female friend, not horndogs. Keep going- you're good! _aW
I enjoy reading the erotica in your stories, never did I think that the absence of it would hold me to a story. It sounds as though you write from the heart, and should be writing as a career. I was completely overtaken with emotion from this installment. =