All Comments on 'How I Got Even with My Boss Ch. 04'

This was definitely NOT the ending I was expecting! Karen played Alex like a guitar, and he fell for it every step of the way. I really liked it!

Although, I do think it's in the wrong category.

I'm really glad you liked it! I know there are many that won't, but this is how it ends.

I know this didn't exactly fall into this category, but putting it under any other category would have spoiled the surprise ending. To myself, I rationalized putting it under this category by his anguish at the beginning, then her "wrestling" him into submission toward the end.

In my mind ... eh ... close enough ;)

Just blasted through the whole story. This was a good quick read. Very nice first post and the twist was fun. I look forward to more stories from you. Now that you have gotten your feet wet, jump on in! I would love to read a more in depth story from you, although, quickies are fun! ;)

I have a few more ideas for erotica, but my mind is travelling in the book direction. I chose this venue to "test the waters". I will most likely post a few more stories, and you can almost guarantee there will be a twist ;)

Nice short sharp read, with a nice twist at the end .

Looking forward to your next submission

Hi there!

Your title is what captured my attention with the short descriptions. Having it into 4 chapters was awesome. It was perfect. Not too short or long, yet it was full of just the right pieces to give me such visuals! It was just what I was looking for!

Great work, I hope you have more like this FANTASTIC!!! Made me hot :D

Good series could have did without chapter 3 but you cleaned it up pretty good. Thanks for sharing. This was a very different storyline.

I love, love, love her. I commented on the previous chapters. Look at the dates. She won and he has the best boss and love he could have.