All Comments on 'How I Met Your Mother'

Kinky, erotic, sort of out-there (but that's what this site is about - to explore those things we don't get at home.

I loved it!

I really liked this one. A little femdom is fun, now and again. The only reason I didn't rate it a 5 was I was hoping she'd somehow include her artifical insemination knowledge in his seduction.

...except rushing the opening of your story by moving straight into an extended description of her. I think the story would be improved by working the description into the narrative a little more gradually. Of course, I know others would disagree with me, so make up your own mind. Good (and fairly realistic) CFNM action, reasonably good character development in a fairly short piece. If I could give you a 4.75, I would, but this effort deserves higher than a 4.0, so happy "5". Nice job.

Wow!