by totallyatease
Yay you've posted another....but alas it ends too quickly. I'm not one to moan but when you're enjoying a story that ends far too soon it dosn't seem quite fair. But, patience is a virtue and I'll bide my time gracefully lol. Keep up the great work !!!
I have to agree that every day I am back to check for updates and can hardly wait for the next chapter. I love this storyline and am totally addicted. So please keep it coming.
write fast and do not be a tease!
hahaha... good writing!! :)
Just standing there minding my own business then BANG! I'm Hooked! :)
I love this story, and I have to echo the sentiments about the chapters ending too quickly. Please write more!
Strong writing, good characters. They seem real people. Thank yoiu
Love your story!
Please continue.
You said it was already finished. Just put em up
Pleaseeeee!
Lol :)
Luv ur characters!! <3
yes i agree - totally a tease - the story of course, not just the author.
This was a great time to give a little more info on Daniel’s background, to help explain why he was being so grouchy. Looking forward to more.
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