All Comments on 'How Wonderful Ch. 02'

get it over with and let the whore lose everything.her kids and hubby.

overtime to make the money necessary to maintain your living style while you go out and act like a BC whore. Perhaps you should read a very good story in Lits files called "yesterday's gone" might give the hubby a way out of what some call a marriage but now is his trap. She has his children but is wantenly fucking with someone who eventually will give her a mixed race child and totally ruin their marriage. Had a friend in Houston once with a bigh dick, it actually was on bottom 15 inches when fully erect, nice white guy in a management job and swung to. If she wanted a big dick should should have gotten a white one so the kids would have some sort of looks like dad. Remember something else the stud of the story was fucking two of them, want to be he wasnt doing more? Yep drug resistant STDs and AIDS are real fun. Can almost guess the female star of this story had an IQ of almost 70!

jumped up and down and then went away for a couple months. he came back and said he couldn't live without Gerri. the only thing he'd ask is that she didn't bring Jamal, Marc, Jackson, and other brothers to do it on their marital; because of all things, Sam couldn't take that at all! <p>

Gerri smiled and said, "See, honey, I told you: if I'm happy, in terms of the things you provide with your hard work, and in terms of what Sharon and Mark and his other black friends with cock almost twice as big as yours, that you too, will be happy! Thank you, honey, for being such an understand and big-hearted white husband. Mark and his friends are just cocks to me, okay? Remember that I love you and you love me and we have some kids together... <p>

"I will never harm our kids, even though Sharon has to watch them sometimes, when Mark and I and others get it on at her place.... But, honey, I will comply with your wishes: only do it very discretely and not doing it here in our bed, or at least our marital bed... I was thinking of the guest room... is that acceptable?"

She says she loves her husband and then goes through hell to fuck this guy that doesn't want anything but her pussy and couldn't support her and her kids even if he wanted to and would be gone in a heartbeat if she got pregenant and now she won't stop fucking around? She has a flaw that will leave her with nothing but a teddy nightie,a slut friend who should be telling her that she is really fucking up, not helping her throw her life away, and a guy who treats her like a slut, which she is. Just don't make the husband a wimp, cause in real life she would be gone and wouldn't be let back. Ever!

the word love if it was a matter of life & death. I hope this costs her sam & the kids.

I believe that when a spouse can't stand the idea of having her husband inside her (for whatever reason) it's time to get a divorce...

I can't stand the "too stupid to live" heroine. This "lady" is not only stupid, but completely selfish and clueless, but then again, supposedly so is her husband. At least, that's what this author is selling, two unbelievable caricatures, combined in a story without one ounce of originality.

7 chapters of the husband not having clue?

Look if the author is doing the wank JPB story that is one thing. But clearly this fucking idiot of an author is going for something far more serious.

7 chapters of the husband dropping clues that white woman hacing sex with well hung black guys is a turn on?

who cares?

I like that you are spending time examining the wife's thoughts and feelings. I don't like what she is thinking and feeling, but that is another matter. Hubby will get a clue eventually, and then we will see where you plan to go with this sideshow. Sharon seems the least likeable of the bunch. The words amoral airhead come to mind. Mark is not far behind, male whore. But, he is black, so what should one expect.

It would be better to use convesation to gain insight into the other persons thinking. The way you have we don't have the option of anticipating when suspicion etc kicks in. Other than that pretty well written.

trailer trash soap opera. how about making Sam and Mark a distant relative of Gerri's.

after Jerry Springer and Maury Povich shows, i thought no people could be dumber. *sigh* but i am wrong.

What if Sam comes home early again? He saw the teddy. if he bought it for his wife he knows what it looks like. What will she do when Sam discovers her deceit and gives her, her walking papers?

She did not love Sam enouf to be true to him.

and still need to be steralized.

I continue to be amazed at the thought process of those who comment so venomously about the lives and morals of characters in a fictional piece on a erotic stories website. ** I could understand it in a real life situation, where someone they know is involved in an extramarital affair, but on Lit??? ** The line between reality and fiction/fantasy must not exist for some of you.

Sex was hot and the standard hubby comes home early and almost catches them was used, nonetheless, good story. I figure that Sam knows that something is up and waiting to catch her in the act.

What I find telling is that she laughed about Sam seeing the baby doll and not recognizing it...that says she doesn't respect her husband and will cheat on him till she is caught. Looking forward to seeing what Sam does when he finds out because you KNOW he's going to find the birth control pills when he moves his pegboard for some strange reason.

One day you may understand that a good writer / author can take his readers so deeply into his or her stage that they can feel the lights that blind you.<P>

Now sit down and stop your whining comments. Act like someone who understands a writers purpose - for a change.

I think the writer got this into the wrong category. This is not a story about a loving wife, but a story about Interracial and a Non loving wife. Oh, she did not save the day when she pretended a fall, she saved her ass.

Nice continuation of the story. Only, I see this as a novel or as a novella more than I do a story. Again, I would like to have more physical description of the characters, although, now I know that Sharon is a larger woman than Gerri.

Lastly, more dialogue instead of narrative would help more this story along. Nonetheless, the writing is excellent, the plot slowly thickens, and I feel that I am spying on real life.

Good job, again, writer.

Ignore the bashers, my friend.

Keep it up...you need to get pregnant from Mark and have his baby so you can give it chocolate milk.

Your one time indiscretion is now a fucking affair. Cunt. I have to read on to see what happens.

that all cheating whores burn in hell.

Very intriguing tale.

yes

is the title "How Wonderful"? Is the answer "Mark's cock in Gerri's pussy"?

Subtle even light handed descriptions of sexual mechanics, for me, becomes a plus for the reader. It shows me you have the insight to allow life experiences, of your reader, to fill in.

Very good story and excellent characters.

So far what husband thinks does not add to the plot.

She is a disgusting mess. But her friend is the instigator and abettor, needs serious consequences. No nuance or mitigating qualities to the three of them

That says it all.

It "only" took 168 words for you to say "she found a place to hide her pills in the garage." - a good example of the excessive words used through out this story. I enjoyed it but gosh darn repeatedly you just take so long to say anything. For me that really distracted from the story. I did like the two points of view.

Boooorrrriiiinnnng....

Another ignorant cuck

Sam needs retribution!

Very realistic. In most of these stories, the wife becomes a single-minded, co*k-hungry robot. In this story, she is conflicted but like most of us, succumbs to temptation. The tension, conflict and suspense is well-written and the foreshadowing is superb! 5/5 stars!