How Wonderful Ch. 05

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I said, "Well, you ought to tell the children what you are doing."

Immediately after supper I went to my shop to view the tape. Except for the fact that Gerri again made herself up for that bastard, the rest was a sight to see. Gerri had hardly gotten in to Mark's room when Sharon burst in with the news. I heard Mark say, 'Aw Shit!' as he got up and started to dress. Gerri screamed, 'Oh my God' as she dashed into Sharon's room and changed. I heard Sharon tell her not to forget the make-up. She dashed into the bathroom and when she came out the make-up had been cleaned off. She called out the door to Mark that she was sorry and he would have to take a rain check. In a matter of minutes Gerri and Sharon were out the door (headed for the park). I couldn't get over how perfect the timing had been.

I went back in and tucked the children in bed feeling very satisfied with my work but still feeling sick all over. It was obvious that Gerri was horny and she was still trying to deal with the kid's revelation to me. I know she was trying to put pieces together, but none of them were fitting.

When I sat down in front of the TV she came over and tried to mess around with me. I finally pushed her away and told her it was Friday and I was tired. What I wanted to say was, "Lady you'll never feel my prick in your cheating pussy again."

(To be continued)

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

This series is typical of the overreaching aspects of amateur writing. The story should've ended with him finding the pills and learning about the babydoll lingerie. Instead, it veers off into this quasi-sci-fi story where MC becomes passive-aggressive (weak, unlikeable male), and the wife gets dumber. The logic and tension that filled and infused life into the early story are gone. This is like the fool playing Wheel Of Fortune who knows the puzzle but gets greedy and busts. That's why editors and beta-readers are vital to any writing project.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
What do you call

Two cunts and a "gentleman" trapped in a burning house? A good start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Like

that's shes' getting manipulated like she's been manipulating hubby. He still loses most, though. I hope he beats the nigger and wife's "friend".

Why doesn't he fuck w/ the whore's birth control. serve her right to have a nigglet or forced to have abortion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Pity about the unknowing apologists

Sorry, TonyKiwi, you are completely wrong.

In many US states, divorcing for adultery kills the alimony. As for the children, a woman who abandons her kids and leaves them with a stranger in a park on a weekly basis, to engage in adultery would very likely lose custody. Please think before you write stupidity, and try to second guess the author. Cheating wife apologists are sickening.

TonyKiwiTonyKiwiover 7 years ago
a pity

about the legal matters, I don't think a restraining and custody order will stand against the mother who is the major carer, how can he prove that he can look after two kids while working full time. No alimony to the wife is a no go as well. Pity it is written well. TK

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