All Comments on 'Humbling Ch. 01'

I don't normally read lesbian sex but your descriptions are very good, and quite graphic and erotic. Keep the descriptions cumming

More like it, please! Well done - five stars.

Not really into f/f stuff, but you said it would be something different. This is only chapter one, but I see nothing different. It comes across as the same old overly simplistic instantaneous M/s trope. Will it be more than 'I know you better than you know yourself, ' and 'This is what I was born to be?' Abstaining from voting until the path becomes clear.

More please write more just as good

More more more!

i believe that a somewhat slower, or a better build up of the mistress observation and certainly more refection of the slave and her reactions of earlier times in the store.