All Comments on 'Humbling Ch. 10: Housewarming, an Epilogue'

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Anonymousover 8 years ago

Glad to see this continued

Loved this story, glad to see more of it. Hopefully more still? Thanks for writing.

Anonymousabout 5 years ago

More please

Another creative surprise scene. Liked thevchange in perspective. However, was sometimes unsure who is meant, maybe some inconsistencies? A continuity editing step might help.

Hope to read more from You!

Anonymousover 2 years ago

Please write more. More Risky, adventures .

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I read and write romantic stories, complete with character and relationship development. A high percentage of my work is lesbian fiction. (That said, I have tried or will try writing almost anything!) It's rare, but I also do a bit of editing and proofreading. I love gettin...

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