All Comments on 'Hunted AU: Strip Search'

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Kamikaze_KittyKamikaze_Kittyalmost 18 years ago
Well...

It's been time you start writing again. Your stuff is amazing and I have been waiting for your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Amazing

Well written...please continue!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
WOW

I loved it! It was as good as the original "Hunted." I encourage you to continue with your stories, they are astounding! Please don't keep us waiting for long!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I love it!

I love Sasha and Suzanne. The Hunted series is incredible!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
cant wait..

is there a next installment?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Hell yeah!

Fucking amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Absolutely Perfect!!

Your stories are the best I've ever read. Please write another sequel soon. VERY SOON!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
the best

your Hunted stories are the most amazing stories I've read in a very long time. I keep coming back to them! Please please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
WTF??!!??

Okay, you CANNOT just leave you story like this!! Afer reading this, I'm DYING to know what happens next. Your characters are so great. I love your other Hunted story too. I noticed you haven't updated in a very loooooooooong while, so I'm here to beg for an update. Lol, I'm shameless that way. Oh well. But seriously, your stories are way to fantastic to just leave incomplete!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Aaayee!

Dont stop there! More purty please!

Love your writing, hoping to see more soon.

Artificial_IArtificial_Ialmost 17 years ago
That's it...

I need more...

MistressDarknessMistressDarknessover 16 years ago
Once again..

The hottest story, Hunted is such a great storyline, please continue with it. I loved Shasha, he is so hot.

you are a wonderful erotic writer, I hope you can keep this going, and I wouldn;t mind knwoing what happens to Hunted characters after they hook up again. The aftermath is good too, to see if they run or hide or if he keeps her and fucks her senseless.

Very hot, enjoyed it much.

Now i'm going to bed.

XD

MistressDarkness

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
More please ;-)

I love your work and really can't wait to see more ;-)

I agree with some of the others it would be nice to see your stuff on paper :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
omg nooo!

omg I was so into it , you can't just leave it like that pleasseeee add morrree I loovve it lol its really hot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
!!!

more, more, more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Can't stop reading!

Totally hot! Makes me want Sasha's mouth between my legs! Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
gosh!

that was hot! i'm not really into non-consent, but your hunted series is great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
O.O

I hope this isnt the end yet!!! Cliffhanger!!!! >.<

SheildedSheildedover 13 years ago
Continue More!!

Cliffhanger? Continue please. Hope there's another chapter. I keep reading this series. Add more chapters like you did with Hunted.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
amazing

your hunted series is amazing, without a doubt the best stuff I have read on this site

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Brilliant

I love this series. I am amazed at how well you capture the heat and intensity of true domination. I would love to find a Sasha of my own. Thank you for these erotic gems. Your writing is superb, more please! !!

IsanaIsanaover 12 years ago
What?

Cliffhanger? It looks like a chapter that got hacked in the middle with a knife. There wasn't... even... a sense of closure. :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Sasha

I want to fuck Sasha. I love these stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Sasha

I want Sasha to fuck me... :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Please write a follow up

I really love this story, but it really makes me want to know what happened between them next. I would love to see a follow up chapter for this story, I think it would get a massive response.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
I want a Sasha too!!

I have truly enjoyed this story in all it's incarnations.... I do wish you would add another chapter or two to this one... the follow up telling us what Sasha did with Suzanne would be most welcome... did he keep her forever, his captive in his home, did he release her to go on her way... or worse, did he kill her or have the grunts come in and enjoy her too??

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Amazing.

Read hunted first and then read this.I think it would be better if it was a story that carries on otherwise technically it is not a series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Yeah.....make a whole story......and add some boob details bro.....make me cum...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good start but....

This was like 60 minutes of foreplay and 10 seconds of screwing. A good lead-in, but......wham, bam -- no description of the sex. Disappointing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Mmmm, THANK YOU, exactly what I want when I look for noncon - something hard edged and erotic, in the realm of escapist fiction without being sugar-coated or pretending it's a good thing that's happening. Suzanne's terror was palpable, the violence frightening and the sex electric.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
o_o Puppy Dog Eyes

Whaaaaa? I read the submission Hunted first, then I read this. There was no lead up from Hunted to this. What happened after Sasha found Suzanne and they decided to live together? Did they or did they not? Needs a transition!!! Write another installment, furrybert! Pleeeeeease....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Always the same

Always the same story and also unfinished this time.

Not so good, sorry.

5PointedStar5PointedStarabout 7 years ago
Znate šta? (Guess what?)

Ovaj Saša je pravi jebač, mislim ljubavnik. (This Sasha is a real fucker, I mean lover.) ❤️️

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Amazing!

Your work is amazing & very well rewritten. Absolutely love Shasa!

kittykatkarakittykatkaraabout 6 years ago
OMG!!! Amazing!

Why do I have the sudden urge to by a plain ticket to Russia? Lol

WitandshitWitandshitabout 6 years ago

Very well written! Hope you make more stories about sasha and suzanne

meowsiesmeowsiesover 3 years ago

who was she looking for?

RabbitPrincess41RabbitPrincess41over 3 years ago
I really hope you continue this

I need to know what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
I'm Hunted

By this story. Do hope you contunue writing this one, so we may find out more. Was this the start of their torrid romance

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Almost similar to the other Hunted story. At least in that story we know that Suzanne is an enemy commando or spy, and she has information to hide. She's caught red-handed and cannot talk her way out of the situation. But in this story we are told that she had come to search for someone. It's very vague. Who is she? She's just in a line of people being searched. She has nothing in her person. So why couldn't she behave like the other people and talk her way out? Or is she a masochistic slut, wanting to be severely, painfully fucked by a soldier? Not very convincing.

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