All Comments on 'Hunted Blood Ch. 5'

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hikecrazehikecrazeover 6 years ago
ok little knitpick

5 pages in 5 chapters in and theres an i love you from a vampire and hunter??? Please give some exposition and inner monolog cuz these charactors feel flat with no history or back story its like reading a movie without knowing whats driving the characters to do what their doing. But great idea.

knightofheartsknightofheartsover 15 years ago
Worthy of Praise

Short but excellent.

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