by Qnightstorm
wow- very erotice; just plain HOT. Great first story. hope you write more soon
Very hot, very well written! The words just flow so smoothly and believably....its just remarkable! I especially like reading about the one girl getting her ass fingered when she wouldnt even let her husband do that!!! Great story!
Your story was great. It escalated somewhat quickly but the effect eventually balanced out. Keep writing!!