by Netoru
I enjoyed it. The ' 10 foot tall and bulletproof feeling' one gets in midst of an affair was duplicated very well. I could smell the salsa burning. Nice.
Well written...but...For me cheating will always be cheating, and in this story he could have divorced the wife as soon he found the latina whore...So simple...Why complicate all?
Wow. Great imagination. Loved the story, in spite of the often atrocious English. "As an English teacher, my connections enabled me to set up a home stay and language lessons for her." However, atrocious English never stopped me from fucking a woman (yes, womAn). I'd fuck her in the ass to punish her for her atrocious English. Without lube, if so deserved. But honestly, you've got to learn the diff between singular and plural: woman vs women. Like, one tit, but two tits. Just irregular. I can't believe it from someone obviously talented in story telling. Also, the name of the country Big Ass is from is Colombia, not Columbia (In spite of the unfortunately named province in Canada, "British Columbia" ). You doing this on purpose?? Keep writing.
Amazing! I loved this.
Perfect imagination - Couldn't stop laughing at the end :)
I absolutely love this story. Had my heart pumping the whole time. Wish that would happen to me.
I need to do this to my wife. She doesn’t give it up enough and she’s half Colombian. WTF?
This dialogue, written as if you're trying to indicate text messages is just super annoying. Read literally any book ever published that has dialogue in it and you'll immediately understand how fucked up your own writing is.