All Comments on 'Hybrid Story Ch. 02'

I will be sure to read the next chp

Maybe making another one soon would be great!

This was a really well written chapter keep em coming :)

However you could use an editor or a proofreader to make sure everything flows well. Also watch your tenses, they tend to change mid sentence which creates confusion and a disconnect from the story.

It is a really good story, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

I loved it, one of the most interesting stories ive read really can't Waite for the next chaptersss.

Im really interested to learn more about his angel side.

i just got a new laptop to replace my old one so the next couple of chapters should be in by the first week of august. i am also working on a new story so that may take a little time

Its past the first week of August...

i got super busy with work and register for classes and stuff...never got around to getting word software for my laptop. i will get to it as soon as im settled at school with should only be a couple of weeks

As long as its as good as the first 2 chapters i dont mind the wait.

Should talk about his parents and wolf/vampire side of the family... And maybe other female mates for his wolf/dragon/vampire/angel side not just one mate.. Maybe have the drangon and angel as mentors...Just an idea but good so far..