All Comments on 'Hypersex in the Hypermart'

by DonElvira

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trickamsterdamtrickamsterdamover 10 years ago
At first I thought you were over-writing.

Later, though, I realized what you were trying to do, and I ended up really liking it.

Stillness1977Stillness1977over 10 years ago
Arguably...

... the first time anyone's ever quoted Thomas Aquinas in a Literotica story. Well done, sir.

DonElviraDonElviraover 10 years agoAuthor
trickamsterdam,

I like writing narrators with wild, over-the-top styles. So it is overwritten, in a sense, but it's overwritten self-consciously, and I have to hope that readers will let me get away with it. I'm glad you liked it.

DonElviraDonElviraover 10 years agoAuthor
Stillness1977,

I'm glad there are people on Literotica who pick up on Thomas Aquinas references.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Real Nice way of story telling

I'm hard...

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