by DonElvira
Later, though, I realized what you were trying to do, and I ended up really liking it.
... the first time anyone's ever quoted Thomas Aquinas in a Literotica story. Well done, sir.
I like writing narrators with wild, over-the-top styles. So it is overwritten, in a sense, but it's overwritten self-consciously, and I have to hope that readers will let me get away with it. I'm glad you liked it.
I'm glad there are people on Literotica who pick up on Thomas Aquinas references.