All Comments on 'Hypnotic Adventures of Cinderella Ch. 06'

Not exactly the Disney version but a very fun twist on a worn out story

Nice job on this story. I've enjoyed each chapter. Thanks!

lovely ending, I really found the whole story to be great.

Hypnotic stories are usually not my type, but this one looked interesting, so I read it. It was more of a romance than a mind control. Actually was a very good story.

I loved the who thing, the way the story builds up to a great ending, well done

thanks for the story!

As said before, it's not really a mindcontrolstory but very nice and interesting.

Very readible like a novel.

Maybe it should be published.

The story started off quite normally but later on you could truly link it to the "original" Cinderella. In my opinion merging a story with your own mindset is work of a genius. I especially like the last part that everything turns into a mess you nearly can't follow, but your writing skills have made it amazingly followable nevertheless. And the last sentence just made it even more clear.

I sure hope for a 10 years later after story, but hey! It's more than amazing already.

I really enjoyed this story. It is the first story I have favourited, and the first story by Blacknight99 I have read. The plotting is clever and witty, and the characters are

appealing.

Just amazing. Truly. Not perfect. I'm not a big fan of skipping right past her deflowering and there were a couple spelling/grammar issues but overall I was really very impressed. I will read everything else you've written.

going to rate this story since Literotica has chosen not to post the whole thing. I have read the whole story on another site and will be reading your stories there from now on. You are a superb writer and I enjoy your work immensely.

Due to this issue (the failure to post the 2nd chapter of this story) I will be doing less reading on this site. This has left a very bad taste in my mouth concerning Literotica.

Literotica would not publish the second chapter as Cindy was a minor engaging in sexual intercourse, as she is described as almost 18.

Lit does a tremendous job of housing some incredible erotica (and some bad) but is strict in making sure that their content is legal and doesn't have any underage action.

Don't hate the player hate the game...

Also I love this story and have read a bunch of your work keep it up!

Great story! I'm a guy and you made me cry