All Comments on 'Hypnotrack Ch. 01: Melissa'

I cant wait to see where this goes...

Good begining !

You have to add news recruits, but if you only write about a guy having sex with whoever he wants it will be boring soon...so you should also add suspens and action !

Some ideas: the program is deleted from the Internet and government tracks users (by sending pretty agents or dangerous psychopaths for exemple) or Mark could try to find the creator of the program but he misteriously disappeared...

Anyway I enjoyed your first chapter, keep going ! :)

I love how this is starting. Lots of room for further development.

This is a very good beginning, and I cannot wait to see what the sequels have in store!

Every guy’s dream, but it could also be a woman’s dream. Any women agree? Let’s hear.

I would love to find a video that could do this to every woman and teen girl that I

encounter.

Sooo sexy having a man take me and tell me he is going to breed me! I am soaking wet!💋

Nice

How should I say this?

Although chapter was nice as man wishing for dream fantasy but as far as 'hypnosis' part is concerned, this chapter was shit. I mean writer himself agress that this is not how hypnosis works. So it wasn't a nice work for me who is lover of erotic hypnosis kink😔