All Comments on 'I Am a Sex God Ch. 02'

no explaining of who the people in the house are?

Thanks for everyone for reading and taking the time to rate.

As to your question redlion75, I'll get around to it. So far I've written the backstories for all the characters and have alot of material plot-wise. I just need to get around to editting it. Also I didn't want to overwhelm people with a 20 page chapter just giving back story.

If interest is high enough in this chapter, I'll get around to editting and post the rest of what I have.

Really?

He reheated gazpacho?

Funny enough you are accurate as i am formerly a line cook. if you notice i mention food in some regard in every chapter

as to your point yes i understand that it is traditionally a cold soup but i've had variations of it that were hot. you may very well argue that is not a true gazpacho, but that is what i enjoy about writing and publishing. thanks for taking the time to comment. even if it was to criticize

So he can create clothes and teleport at will, but has to fumble around with the water knob and can't detect if people are inside the house?