All Comments on 'I Came Home - For You'

I really enjoyed to story alot and though it to be extremely well written. However, in certain parts it got rather prosey and seemed like you were trying a bit too hard to make it sound not just your run of the mill erotica. This took away from story a little bit . But other then that i twas great you developed the polt very well. Keep writing and I look foward to seeing a sequel.

Great job! It was just enough romance and just enough sex to make it raunchy and sweet.