All Comments on 'I Couldn't Lie Ch. 01'

A lovely story about the seduction of a sexy young lady, in spite of her "religious" scruples. Sunday School girls have generally been taught that fucking is sinful.

This story is a good basis for more, but it needs a lot more work.

Loved it but you know Daddy T is going to want more and more and you ned to give it to him so do another chapter!

When's chapter 2 coming?

Fantastic Story... you have a super imagination for being "young" can't wait for the following chapters!

Post a photo of yourself too please.

I really hope you plan on continuing this. It's *really* hawt.

reminds me of my first time, excellent cant wait for the next one.

Hard to beleive that was your first time...writing I mean. Good job. I imagine an ongoing affair with him, as she slowly outgrows him and finally cheats on him with a younger man.

Exactly the type of story that I LOVE...great job...don't stop writing...you have a gift.

need... more... must... have...more!

For a first timer this was great. I loved it. Keep writing.

Heather

Didn't like it much. The guy was raping his 'best friends' daughter as far as i can see.. And she was so dumb that she couldn't see through his manipulations.. The age thing I don't f*ng care about, but there should be trust and faith involved in all relations.. Nope, not a good one.. Yoron

That was awesome!! I love the part when he pushes his knee in between hers, before they fuck. It reminds me of that nervous, anticipatory, lack-of-control feeling when you're a teenager on your first date with a hot guy you wanna fuck but are kinda scared of...