by giudo2848
kind of stories must be written by gays or lesbians or unbalanced people. The certainly are not written by happy married people
N E V E R !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Met one who couldn't cum in a whore's mouth when she was sucking him off. Bad story and bad idea for it. I would ship out mate and stop writing. I hope you're better puling line than writing or the ship will drift out to sea. Gave you a 25 only bcause you're a sailor./
Sorry, but this is a sub-genre which needs a real twist of inspiration and really precise writing to make it work (the recent "Honorable Infidelity" is a good example). This had neither. I'd suggest a different category and maybe taking one of the volunteer editors on before your next submission.
by these jerkoffs.
Your story aint bad. it definitely has legs and I'd like to see you develop the idea.
She will need dear old hubby for room and board only. There will be no love inside of a year.
Dumb shits abound in these stories.
Story did not flow in any direct sense, other than the protaganist didn't like fellatio.
this slut bitch whore is nothing but a worthless piece if trash CHEATER