All Comments on 'I Get To Watch?'

by giudo2848

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
These

kind of stories must be written by gays or lesbians or unbalanced people. The certainly are not written by happy married people

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Really bad. I was in the Navy and never, NEVER,

N E V E R !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Met one who couldn't cum in a whore's mouth when she was sucking him off. Bad story and bad idea for it. I would ship out mate and stop writing. I hope you're better puling line than writing or the ship will drift out to sea. Gave you a 25 only bcause you're a sailor./

ErotonautErotonautover 17 years ago
Yawn

Sorry, but this is a sub-genre which needs a real twist of inspiration and really precise writing to make it work (the recent "Honorable Infidelity" is a good example). This had neither. I'd suggest a different category and maybe taking one of the volunteer editors on before your next submission.

GagelessGagelessover 17 years ago
Dont be discouraged...

by these jerkoffs.

Your story aint bad. it definitely has legs and I'd like to see you develop the idea.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
her needs

She will need dear old hubby for room and board only. There will be no love inside of a year.

Dumb shits abound in these stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
go

away

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Doesn't Like Fellatio? Clearly This Should be Fantasy and Science Fiction!

Story did not flow in any direct sense, other than the protaganist didn't like fellatio.

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago
Cuck

Dildo moved from incest to cucks, almost on the bottom now.

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGabout 3 years ago
SLUT

this slut bitch whore is nothing but a worthless piece if trash CHEATER

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