All Comments on 'I Impregnated the General's Wife'

Very interesting story but it was sorta dragged out and long. Also Dodge Vipers and Viagra were both way after the Vietnam war was over.

Reader should keep in mind the time frame(s) of this story. Altho Dodge Viper and Viagra is mentioned, they are used as in a latter part of the story where pregnancies are occurring. The periods of "60s and 70s" are used to describe the attitudes of commanders during that time to justify the impregnating of their wive(s)in vindictiveness.

Hot story but I was thrown off by use of viagra and birth control pills in the early 60's.

I did not know taht DODGE VIPERS were made back in the 60's.not too bad of a story.

this was a very good well written story. I liked the story line grammer was good ...just a very good story worth the read.

This story is so full of inconsistencies that it boggles the mind! He's an airman making $70 - $90 a month, but she's got a Viper and he takes Viagra? Oh come on! At least try to make a little sense please, there is no pleasure in reading such junk!

The story line has a strong basis, but I found the story weakly written. The writer wandered all over the place (perhaps the elongated timeframe has something to do with that), and it appeared that he had a personal political agenda/vendetta to pursue in addition to weaving his erotic picture. Technical facts weren't carefully considered (the Viper/Viagra thing), and the choice of wording often conflicts with each other (ex: '...empty and hallow'). It ALWAYS pays to review what you've written, to further ensure correctness of facts, grammar, and continuity.

It was just a great get back at the military asshole commanders story.... until you hit the Viagra... Timeline needed work.. Oh yeah, and You needed to define MacNamara a little better.

The grammar and sentence structure was that of an 8-year-old. Awful.

This is another case where the public comments should appear BEFORE the story, not after it.

The Viagra reference ruined the whole story for me. Viagra didn't exist back then.

This took place during the '60s, but he has Viagra?

I thought the story wasn't as fully developed as it could be and the ending seemed rushed and overly contrived, even for a fantasy.

How did you get Viagra 30 years before it was available?

You show creative thought, but you need help keeping your story and characters straight. Please, please, don't post any more without enlisting the help of an editor.

Actually the beginning had me thinking you were indeed a flap, but your middle writing was inadequate with the end being just lame.

You should have quit with the mistake of July becoming Marge.

Aside from a bent concept of what is erotic and sensual, and the need for proofreading, and fucking anything that is married and has a hole, it was very very very believeable to some? As a humerous story it was ok, if you intended it that way.

However, for some strange abnormal kinky reason, I can't quite understand why making a bastard child in someone else's wife (repeatedly and as well as in many other wives)it is considered by some authors to be arousing to anyone but themselves.

Maybe however, if you grew up with the knowledge you were a bastard child, it would be really erotic? Maybe however, creating a bunch of bastard kids increases a man's erotisism proportionately with each woman left to raise or abuse his offspring?? Hey, maybe now it begins to make more erotic sense? But, some people seemed to think it was really cool - didn't they? Hey, maybe after a sixpack or two, it could be more than just a little sick? Give or take a lot or less sense. You know I'm still trying to learn how this works, so bear with me. I may understand this some day, but down deep I hope not to.

Perhaps you could explain it? What am I missing out on here?

"The hair guarding Marge's pussy covered from just below her belly button and down about an inch onto her inner thighs and legs below her pussy lips. It was thick and long.." The lines I would lick for!!!

Viagra and Dodge Viper in the 1960's? Obviously long before your time. Next time either do research or write about something you really know about.

Never mind the Viagra, other than this being very poorly written, you blew it when you wrote "...I drove her car, a bright red Dodge Viper..." Definitely not available in the '60s. What a moron. Do you have any sense of history?

I want that 15 minutes of my life back. I normally love the impregnation stories, no matter the nature (just something about it gets to me), and this one showed promise. When it started off, I kept waiting for it to go somewhere beyond this Air Force grunt bitching about everything. Then, once he met her, it started to pick up. Incredibly unbelievable, but had promise for a fair stroke-story. Unfortunately, the name inconsistances (I can never understand HOW you do that) were distracting, and by the time he popped a Viagra during Kennedy's presidency, I quit reading. After scanning the rest of the page and reading the other comments, I'm glad I did. It looks like it just went downhill from the time travel bit. Two balls and a limp cock way way down, and I can sum up the story in one word. Craptastic!

Try a Cobra or a shelby and Spanish Fly

What an incredible piece of crap. And I have a feeling you meant JULIE and not JULY.

No Viagra or Dodge Vipers in the Vietnam era.

One can use horse shit as manure! This story can't be so used!

And I loved it. Actual situations were very unlikely but I felt the feelings.

Thank you.

Incoherent garbage. Damn you T, whatever you are.

Too much doesn't add up. A Dodge Viper and Viagra in a story that appears to be set in the 60's? There were other things as well that I picked up on being retired AF. Nice effort.

Golden showers not for me. Ventured onto anal once without going through. Lots of hot story material relayed matter-of-factly.