All Comments on 'I Just Don't Know . . . Ch. 02'

Very good second chapter. I hope you will continue with this story. I enjoyed reading it.

Wonderful. good pacing and we should keep this going for a whole week in NYC.

Barely, I was hoping you could pull off a great sequel and you did. Nicely detailed and a great sense of urgency between the women. I think you've got a winner with this one. Great job! Lance

I love the way you use words to paint a picture. Well done! I enjoyed reading this story as well as the previous chapter.

Is there a chance of more?

What a beautiful build up of a 'real' human being's personal emotions as she deals with her confusions and her desires. Then a gloriously sensual and erotic scene as they both become communicative and cooperative lovers. Extrordinary!

This is the kind of writing all should aspire to. Exquisite, prolonged details, razor-sharp to the point of perfection! You make the reader sit on the very edge of their seat. Such compelling authorship! Well-thought out, wonderfully executed, perfectly polished. Bravo! - David in NC

And the descriptions. You are a natural writer.

It's believable and not rushed. ~ L

the first line of your first story said she is not a lesbian, I am thinking right if she was not one then, she is heading that way now, it should be interesting to find out what becomes of that statement