All Comments on 'I Love You Ch. 04'

Love the tension and the drama between your characters. I agree your story should not be under Romance, NonConsent/Reluctance would be a better category. Hope you keep writing, can't wait to see the battle between Jezebel vs. Ludvine vs. Jake. It is rare one see male and female characters battle it out so physically and emotionally, especially with a twist of psycho girl thrown in there!

i think that the 1st 2 shouldve been under N/R. the 3rd maybe you should change the summary to something about .....'Change .....' that way you can switch the categories smoothly.

I like your story. I read it because is written by you and not because it was in a cathegory or another. One single problem i have with it - the chapters seems too short and not posted as often as i'd like :)

The premise of this story is very good. Kept me interested and hooked. I love these two characters...both headstrong and impulsive. The sex between them is explosive. Love it!

I don't care which category it falls under...just keep writing.

Love this, love this, love this! Be good to your addicted reader and post asap.

I really want this story to be a romance and have a happy ending, but still a few bumps in the road, and I think the category should be romance

You should put it under Non/Consent Reluctance...because it is romance, just with a bit of reluctance. Great read please continue!

I love this story, can't wait to read the next chapter.

I really believe that this story should go in the NonConsent/Reluctance category, leaning more towards Reluctance. This story is truly something and I hope you continue it. I love the characters and the plot. You are truly a great writer (I'm also a fan of your other works!). Again, consider the Reluctance category. With two dominant personalities involved in a relationship, there is always reluctance, on both parts, to compromise and face the fact that they love each other because someone has to always be on top :). It is up to you where the story goes. You will still have me as a fan no matter what. Thank you for writing such a great story.

this story is good. Like the character interaction and the dialogue. I think this needs to be NonConsent/Reluctance and not BDSM. But where evere you put it I'll read it. Please continue with the updates.

Do you plan to finish it? I hope so. Thanks

There is little actual BDSM here. This is NonConsent/Reluctance.

wow.. tht was really something... and you're right...it doesn't come under the BDSM category... its should probably go under Non Reluctance

its fine where it is

leave it in BDSM