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Click hereNow, after forcing her to stop the abortion, abducting her than chaining her to the floor he knew there was no way in hell he would ever get her back again. He had destroyed any chance of reconciliation but he had no choice, he wasn't ready to let her terminate her pregnancy, he needed some time to think about this. That child had a strong chance of being normal, no deviancy, and no murderous fantasies. It seemed wrong to just kill it with out giving it a chance or at least some serious thought!
***Author's note***
This story has had issues with wrong categories since I first submitted it! The first chapter was in a few different categories before I forced it to settle in BDSM. Luckily, a lot of readers had messaged me with their opinions on which category they felt it fell into, so I went with the majority. I honestly have no idea where it should go @ this point; I really don't feel like this is a BDSM story! I wanted a story of two severely fucked up individuals, their interpretation of love and how love would function in a violent relationship. With it in BDSM, it seems like I am trying to make it a dominant/submissive relationship and it's really not, it's misleading! A previous editor told me that switching categories is a BIG NO-NO with the readers, so I left it. I really want to switch it so I'll check the rules and see if I can, but I still have ABSOLUTELY NO IDEA where to put it!!! If you have any ideas, holla @ ur girl!!!
wow.. tht was really something... and you're right...it doesn't come under the BDSM category... its should probably go under Non Reluctance
There is little actual BDSM here. This is NonConsent/Reluctance.
this story is good. Like the character interaction and the dialogue. I think this needs to be NonConsent/Reluctance and not BDSM. But where evere you put it I'll read it. Please continue with the updates.
I really believe that this story should go in the NonConsent/Reluctance category, leaning more towards Reluctance. This story is truly something and I hope you continue it. I love the characters and the plot. You are truly a great writer (I'm also a fan of your other works!). Again, consider the Reluctance category. With two dominant personalities involved in a relationship, there is always reluctance, on both parts, to compromise and face the fact that they love each other because someone has to always be on top :). It is up to you where the story goes. You will still have me as a fan no matter what. Thank you for writing such a great story.
You should put it under Non/Consent Reluctance...because it is romance, just with a bit of reluctance. Great read please continue!
I really want this story to be a romance and have a happy ending, but still a few bumps in the road, and I think the category should be romance
Love this, love this, love this! Be good to your addicted reader and post asap.
The premise of this story is very good. Kept me interested and hooked. I love these two characters...both headstrong and impulsive. The sex between them is explosive. Love it!
I don't care which category it falls under...just keep writing.
I like your story. I read it because is written by you and not because it was in a cathegory or another. One single problem i have with it - the chapters seems too short and not posted as often as i'd like :)
i think that the 1st 2 shouldve been under N/R. the 3rd maybe you should change the summary to something about .....'Change .....' that way you can switch the categories smoothly.
Love the tension and the drama between your characters. I agree your story should not be under Romance, NonConsent/Reluctance would be a better category. Hope you keep writing, can't wait to see the battle between Jezebel vs. Ludvine vs. Jake. It is rare one see male and female characters battle it out so physically and emotionally, especially with a twist of psycho girl thrown in there!