- BDSM
- I Love You Ch. 04
- Page 2
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Now, after forcing her to stop the abortion, abducting her than chaining her to the floor he knew there was no way in hell he would ever get her back again. He had destroyed any chance of reconciliation but he had no choice, he wasn't ready to let her terminate her pregnancy, he needed some time to think about this. That child had a strong chance of being normal, no deviancy, and no murderous fantasies. It seemed wrong to just kill it with out giving it a chance or at least some serious thought!
***Author's note***
This story has had issues with wrong categories since I first submitted it! The first chapter was in a few different categories before I forced it to settle in BDSM. Luckily, a lot of readers had messaged me with their opinions on which category they felt it fell into, so I went with the majority. I honestly have no idea where it should go @ this point; I really don't feel like this is a BDSM story! I wanted a story of two severely fucked up individuals, their interpretation of love and how love would function in a violent relationship. With it in BDSM, it seems like I am trying to make it a dominant/submissive relationship and it's really not, it's misleading! A previous editor told me that switching categories is a BIG NO-NO with the readers, so I left it. I really want to switch it so I'll check the rules and see if I can, but I still have ABSOLUTELY NO IDEA where to put it!!! If you have any ideas, holla @ ur girl!!!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 15 years agowow.. tht was really something... and you're right...it doesn't come under the BDSM category... its should probably go under Non Reluctance
Anonymousabout 15 years agoThere is little actual BDSM here. This is NonConsent/Reluctance.
Anonymousover 15 years agothis story is good. Like the character interaction and the dialogue. I think this needs to be NonConsent/Reluctance and not BDSM. But where evere you put it I'll read it. Please continue with the updates.
in4sinover 15 years agoI really believe that this story should go in the NonConsent/Reluctance category, leaning more towards Reluctance. This story is truly something and I hope you continue it. I love the characters and the plot. You are truly a great writer (I'm also a fan of your other works!). Again, consider the Reluctance category. With two dominant personalities involved in a relationship, there is always reluctance, on both parts, to compromise and face the fact that they love each other because someone has to always be on top :). It is up to you where the story goes. You will still have me as a fan no matter what. Thank you for writing such a great story.
SecretFantasy69over 15 years agoYou should put it under Non/Consent Reluctance...because it is romance, just with a bit of reluctance. Great read please continue!
Anonymousover 15 years agoI really want this story to be a romance and have a happy ending, but still a few bumps in the road, and I think the category should be romance
