by roswalien
"He reached across the table and took her hand" should have been "I" instead of "He"
Great story...hopefully you won't stop here!!!
Thanks for sharing, This is a stand alone or a multi-chapter story either way this was a great read.
Please continue writing this interesting and intriguing story. The way it is now ending the reader is left hanging with the question of what eventually happened in their romance.
Georgeinomaha1
You have left us hanging with multiple issues to be resolved. Get busy and finish this story!
Very nice story. I’m still waiting for Chapter 2. A story this good really deserves a sequel.
NOT a Romance but an Erotic Coupling story so WRONG category. I do not prefer a shaved pussy. I like a woman not a little kid. I'm not a pedophile which is what I feel when I see a woman with a shaved pussy YUK!!!
It’s almost worth five stars. With another chapter to tie up all the loose ends, it would be. But it’s been several years and I’m not really expecting a second chapter. Dammit!!
If you can please write another chapter to conclude this very nice romantic story
I too enjoyed it. And just like others I would really like a sequel to tie up the loose ends. But I looked at the author’s info page, and it seems that this was the last story he posted. And that was six years ago. Sooo, I’m not gonna hold my breath waiting for any more here. But what we got was good, very good, and I am grateful for it. So thanks, roswalien, if you ever get the itch to write again this story could use a little bit of finishing.
The story was excellent up until the end where the author left just too may loose ends not addressed. Do they get together for that happily ever after, does she change her mind about wanting kids? Since this was posted in July of 2014 and the author seems to have quit writing on Lit, I doubt we will ever see a sequel. Really too bad as this was a really well written warm and tender love story. 5 stars