by JeanneSis
There is absolutely no such word as "cummed". The correct word to use when you want to indicate the past tense of "cum" is just plain old "came".
There's a lot more wrong than just that, I'm afraid! The lowest I've ever voted since I started reading.
haha I love the way you get into character with your stories. They're lots of fun. I can't wait to see what you have for us next. Please, don't leave us in suspenders too long ok? <wink>
This is written like an Arkie hillbilly would narrate it. I'm in AR and it's pretty good. So get with the style that the author intended or go write your own & see if its any better.
Was the comment about dumbing down society! LOL....yeah I heard banjos playing in this one too!
inbred freakazoids.... the whole group couldn't have an IQ over 75 if you multiplied them all together... I like incest stories, but DAMN, find a dentist.. put down the banjo, and go fuck a gator.. at least it would do the natural thing and raise the IQ of the swamp. Now if you've read this far I have to tell you.. If this was meant as a satire. ... well, you did a good job.. if not you really suck... hard to tell.
JeanneSis,
Really, I love to read stories of incestious marriage between family members with approval of other members. your story Dad marry with daughter is really wonderful. but regret that its very short. it should be longer upto children of daughter from father. and father and his children from daughter both will suck milk from mother. or while babiess suckling boobs of their moms (His daughter) while he fucks her ass.