All Comments on 'I Remember Bethany Ch. 05'

You use metaphors perfectly. THe Sirens song of her nerves soon took over. Good job, You make Erotica wat its saposed to be, An art. A very, VERY sexy art. I started on this chapter But now ill have to Read the rest. Keep writing, This should be the top, not the Life changing trip with mother crap.

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