All Comments on 'I Remember Bethany Ch. 06'

Right click and Show Pic won't bring them up.

Nicely written,

I agree, nicely written. But badly illustrated. I think cartoon like illustrations are not acceptable to a story so nicely written. The illustrations are so bad, in my opinion, that the whole story suffers badly. The illustrations are a distraction and takeaway focus on the story. Real photos would have been so much better.

Like Anon1 says, illustrations on second page absent on 09/23/2010, also.

Right click/open = fail.

Open in new tab = fail.

Copy image URL, paste-and-go in address bar = fail.

Please fix issue, and repost story.

Because of technical issues, vote = 1 star.

The error was on the site's part, so we are re-"new"-ing this submission. Sorry for the oops! :-)

9/29/10--The second page's illustrations still don't show.

the second page is still the same as before, no pictures not an illustrated story man work on the problem

Keep up the good work, very enjoyable.

free sample:

http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/26448

What a great end to a great series. It's a sad epilogue but you have that rare talent to have a hot story with well made and relevant pictures.

They really brought the characters to life.

One of the very best series. I really like the illustrations, which, interestingly, given the theme, have the look of European erotica.

Holy shit, Rondori. This is amazing: beautifully written and wonderfully drawn. The pictures are so graphic and sexual. I haven't seen any illustrations even CLOSE to as good anywhere else on Literotica. And all in all, I think this Bethany girl would be proud of you guys. If only she read this..... I have a few suggestions for your next writing (please don't stop!). Because I am still considered a teenager, I like reading more stories of people my age. Maybe the age range for me would be around 20 - 25? It would be amazing if you could even try accomadating this annoying request! If you haven't attempted before, it could be interesting to try a new perspective. Regardless, this was amazing, and I loved it! Don't stop writing (and drawing)!

I really enjoyed this story, and the illustrated chapters even made it more exciting.. I love interracial erotica and just wish I could find more stories like the one you have mastered here with this one.

Your Authors note at the end made me think this was based on a true story and if it was, I can only assume that having an Interracial relationship during that time was much more taboo than it is now. I myself have been Interracially involved for more that 18 years now and I'm so happy that having a black lover/husband these days is much more excepted than what it is was even when I started, let alone as far back as the Viet Nam era when it was VERY taboo...Anyway,,, thanks for the terrific story and hope to read more of your IR stories in the future..

Simply fun. Few stories have such rich language and a scope that simulates the real world so well. I appreciated the skill in the sketches as well. (And thank you for not giving Bethany tits that would have been too large for a cow.)