All Comments on 'I Robot?'

Liked it. Kinky Robot. Dumb Ass Wife. Good Pair.

take over! lol A little scary, but funny, and kinda hot after all. I guess come the singularity (?), there could be worse fates than getting pimped out as the biopleasuremodel!

Good stuff!

I get the awfully gleeful feeling that the maidtron gave the wife a leetle bit more than wine with that first meal. Some date rape drugs perhaps?

Anyway, this is one of the most strangely erotic stories I have ever read. The strangest part is: I can't figure out why it's so damn sexy. The sex scenes are terse and to the point; it boggles me as to how it could be so HOT. Obviously, well done. Worth every time I have, and will read it.

This story is a direct ripoff of JLS's story "Maid", which is on the following URLs:

www.many-realms.net/LTBSA/stories/maid.html

www.asstr.org/files/Collections//mcstories/www/Maid/Maid.html

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Enjoyed your story it was fun, light, good reading and a nice twist. Knew the Robot was going to take over, than seemed like the wife would come back. But NO! The Robot was not goung to stand for that, HA HA! Loved

It! Would like to see some more like this!

Thank Yoy!

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I wish there was more to read. All of the Maidtron's suggestions sound like a lot of fun. :)

@Marlene: I noticed the same thing

This was great, write a sequel

This is a brilliant piece!

Love the twist where you play with the confusion between who is who. Keep going please.

So, hubby works very hard to put food on the table and a roof over their heads... And it's all downhill from there.

Was this written by a ten-year-old boy?

Not much graphic sex, which is what we're all looking for, but very arousing nonetheless.

I couldn't work out why Judie became so brainwashed, but no matter, twas a pity though that she thought of herself as a robot, much hotter had she been trapped inside her mind but still compelled to obey. But maybe that's just me? I did like the fact that instead of just getting control the maidtron planned to use Judie for so much more, so many more adventures are possible. Though looking at the date this was published I doubt we'll see anymore, shame because it's really very good and very erotic.

I did notice though that a couple of other readers stated that this may have been "stolen," I hope not, because as a writer myself, though maybe not a good one, I would be very pissed should someone else put their name to my hard work.

Otherwise, excellent and thank you.

Not very arousing, but very horrifying. It makes me realize the disgusting nature of all android fantasies. The fembot seems strangely malevolent to Julia, which it doesn't seem that Julia would do the same. So this is definitely am evil ending. Having Julia become a whore while her husband doesn't even know the difference makes this ultimately the most evil and terrifying conclusion to this story. The horrifying thing isn't even that Julia thinks she's a robot or that the robot stole her life. It's that her husband doesn't ever know, and so from his perspective it is terrifying.

I love this type of story, where the robot assistant or maid convinces the real counterpart they are in fact the robot. Loved this story, let’s have another?

This may have awakened something in me...

Nice story, would like an explanation on why the wife randomly lost the ability to speak English. Would be a cool twist if the “wife” that lost ability was actually the Maidtron trying to convince itself it was human all along. But if the story’s premise is not a twist, it all falls apart. A human woman can’t be “powered” by a vibrator. Humans need food and water to survive, and the second the husband notices the android imposter not eating/drinking and the actual wife losing weight, the androids getting scrapped.o