I loved the story. It was right to the point and was very realistic. It brought back memories of my younger days, and I could imagine myself doing the very things described in the story. Great Job OddityGreyEyes!
Amateur writer, amateur at life in general, I don't tend to finish things, or if I do, it takes a long time.. Nicknamed kitty, as I'm told I act more like a cat than a human. I'm sceptical.. >.>' Any feedback on my work is highly appreciated as I'd like to improve.