All Comments on 'I Want Your Love'

Promising, although you might consider writing in third person. Just a suggestion.

Five.

I hope that you don't wait too long before you submit more of this story, I love the story so far.

Already addicted! Post more ASAP!

so great! can't wait for more

Loving it! Looking forward to more!

Talk about out with the old and in with the new...now that's something! Wish I had a friend like James..Keep writing because I will definately keep reading...and as far as your writing mistakes they are not bad..trust me I have seen worse.

plot not to bad but I can't see the erotic part in it. it starts with violance then gets on with violance , then we get a hint that some more violance is done to the ex, then we know that there lives is based on violance and for some unknown reason she gets treated better than the rest of the woman (whores) the know (but she knows) and in the end we have some threats for more violance.

with all respect that you have a weakness for alpha males, first violance does not turn me on and second a real alpha male does not have to prove it every second, gay or not.

I can't wait to read more. Keep it up!

what is it with black women and Italian mobsters?

lucianlover I'm still trying to figure out who's black in this story. Nope not a one in there but, from what I've been reading and It must be an all and out fantasy. I know in my family where there are plenty of Italian men and black/mixed females together someone is writting alot of reality. (Big smile or I wouldn't be here)

The story says she's filipina. No black chicks here.

I liked the story snd gave it 4 stars only because I'm eager for more and I hate waiting!

Very good start, but I can't wait to read more.

With a name like Lalaine I expected her to be Hawaiian, but Filipina is close. Sounds good and am lookign forward to more.

It's interracial love category. You can't expect it to be all about black people with other race. It's about any race. Like what she wrote, Asian and Italian. Just saying... Love your story. Please update soon.

I can't wait to see how Stephano finds a way to see Lalaine.

i'm asking when are you going to update? soon? haha! i can't wait for your story.... please update it soon. thank you

Omg could u please finish this story? I would really love to know what happens with Tony & Lalaine, its so addicting!!!! Great story!!!!

This seems likesuch a good start, I'm loving the story just from your introduction. Please update soon!

Please finish the story !!!!!!!

I hope you decided to update this story. It's really good so far!

Great start. Hope you finish this and write more stuff in the future!

You have solid potential in this first effort. A bit of tweaking is in order, but all in all a good foundation. Don't hesitate to get an editor sometimes objective eyes are just what is needed to give the over the top push to a story. Go for it!!!

for a first chapter this is an awesome begining to this story....i hope theres a continuation to this story cause i have been waiting a while for it to continue..........................update soon please

Ugh...I hate when writers don't finish their stories! I usually check first to see if a story is complete before I start reading, but this one snuck in during a search. Now, I'm hooked. It's a great beginning. Please finish it soon!

This was GREAT! Please update. Give us an early Christmas gift and update!

please update!!!!!!!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!! This story was great!!!!!

Finidh this...

When are you gonna finish !!!!!!........

I need more please it's been 4 years please please!!!