All Comments on 'I Was The Third'

Such a wonderful description of a 3some.

Very descriptive, well done in such a short space, and HOT. Thanks for sharing it with us!

I have read three of your "short" stories and they are Sooooo HOT! I wonder what will happen to me if you write a longer story. The thought of a sustained dose of your writing scares me... and I want it!

Thank you.

You write very well Lynn!!!....Wish I was in one of your stories! ;)...Best Regards

Well written, very descriptive, you put your readers in the action.

Ahaaaa Great story, thought maybe the male would be face fuck, forced to tease lick, suck and bring you to a climax and forced to swallow all not letting a drop get away. I would love that.You write so well, how about one including that??

a 3-some I'd luv to be a part of -- great writing, so easily to visualize the heat and animal passion

Believable and so very hot. Thank you!

I like how you cut to the chase in this bit. Short and sweet, although I found myself wondering what they looked like. Was that intentional, to let the reader impose their own ideals and assumptions about the characters?

Very nice. Short but very juicy words. Nice images.

HOT !!!!!!