by CookieCutter
But could have been great. The set up, free spirited young girl challenging an older woman's repressed desire, was one of the most original I've seen here. The erotic tension was building nicely when BAM she dives in with hardly a backward glance to her previous reluctance. If that final capitulation to desire had lasted more than one sentence (ideally two pages) this could have been a classic.
Very good story with a lot of erotic content. Can't wait for a follow up.
Well that was... AWESOME! I can only think of the fact that the janitor walked in on Etta eating Reena up like a hungry animal... since that's why Reena giggled when Etta said that :p
Can't wait for chapter 2 :)
You had my attention from the gradual build up to the orgasmic conclusion. I am not sure that the story reqires another chapter, but I wouldn' mind your descrpition of the older woman's intrduction to a warm tongue on her labia and clit, and later a dildo stretching her ...