by CuteSlaveGirl
Very nice.
This would also be great as a Text to Audio story. Please consider recording it for our enjoyment.
wow this story is awesome you have made a really good work. hope to read something more soon
Thank you for the compliments :)
Audio sounds very interesting, might be fun to do!
Normally, I prefer longer stories that take time to build the atmosphere, but this brief little cameo really works well and is definitely erotic. I can imagine you reading it to me! I hope you continue to post.
I have loved reading all your stories. Please write more.
It really shows when the author loves the subject about which she's writing. You obviously love being on your knees and having the guy hold your head while pleasures himself in your mouth!
You certainly love being a girl and doing all the things girls do!
Decent premise.
But sex is like a 100-yard dash. It's in a hurry to be over and done with.
No interreaction about how he was enjoying her attention to his cock and balls.
No dialog from her about how he was/wasn't enjoying it.
Three stars.