All Comments on 'Icebound'

I loved the way you told this story. Very touching and romantic, good luck in the contest!

and it seemed to be a novel approach - a romance being described by one person to another, rather than being lived. I have to wonder about the references to Master or Charles, though. Are both women subs to the same dom?

It is very different from the other Valerie stories but none the less a very good peace of work.

Well written and plotted. Nice use of flashbacks and dialogue. A tad confused on the D/s angle--but this may be part of a series. Good luck in the contest.

Very romantic and very well written. it is well put together with the reflections back. Loved the story and plot. thank you for this journey.

You have a lovely writing voice. Your story is so clear, so evocative, I could almost hear Valerie tell Sally.

...you scream... we all scream for ice cream... sorry I could not resist. Very sweet, very icy, very very creamy. It gave a nice insight into Valerie and how she came to be. Well written and a fun story. xantu

What a lovely, touching story. Thank you for it.

This is the best story and the best series I've read on this site

Thank you so much for this story. I had been thinking it would be god to know more about Val and Mike, when I came across this great story.

I love the way you have Val telling her lover and Mistress the story rather than having the story in "real time". I also like Sally's reaction and love for someone she has never met.