All Comments on 'If Only Her Husband Knew!!!'

A farcical story with no point to it at all. The dialogue sucks, the plot is non-existent and the subject matter is totally predictable. Oh, and for the twit who doesn’t want non-complimentary remarks…how come everyone is free to comment, except those who disagree with you?

For starters the story needs to be longer.

The story shows promise but like many boys, it is doomed by a premature climax. I hope to see future installments delving into more of the little submissive slut doing the office and maybe an angry husband finding out and punishing her.

Overly used commodity

the writer want let you know there is payback for fucking over the hubby.that why people go into offices and kill people for fucking with their family asshole.

it is office managers and co workers like the wife has that causes husbands to go to the woman's workplace and blow all the people there away including the wife. The widows of the manager and the office workers can't understand how a crazed deranged husband can shoot all their men in a bloody rampage. I'm sure that the manager had one thought before his eyes were blown out by buckshot...I should have left the woman alone...so why didn't he? Nyminus

husband finds out and gets out before he gets some unwelcome gift that keeps on giving. and if the guys in the office get that ! consequences

Something is missing on this one. She did not want one of those guys in the toilet to "cum inside" but later on you sent her home with her pussy full of your babymakers. So did she get pregnant by you, or what?

A jerk-off asshole story. If it was written by the husband it would read something like this:

Cheating slut wife fucks all her co-workers in public toilets. I had pictures and video taken and divorced her and sued co-workers and company for Alienation of Affection. She leaves the marriage with nothing; loses custody of the children, gets fired from her job as does the conspiring co-workers and husband walks away with million dollar settlement from company. Wife now works the streets and lives in a one room dive.

That's the way it should be written.

And then you woke up in your cornflakes.

That's why he wasn't home when she got there, and he was never seen again.

You must get mom and dad pounding on the bathroom door a lot with all the time you must spend in there pulling your pathetic pud coming up with this dribble. Go back to fingering your ass and give up writing all together you WANKER.

What the guys did not know .. That he had hired a PI ... The Hubby had pictures with their wives were getting copies of .. Enjoy explaining that to the judge

Just too juvenile and poorly written to take seriously.