by crow_girl21
I was in the army for 2 years during the Viet Nam conflict, and spent a Christmas away from home. It was a very miserable time for me, I was not married at the time but engaged. I spent Christmas Eve that year out in the boonies as I was in the infantry. As Dad Davis said, I feel for the men and women that are over seas now fighting for, I 'm not sure what, but they are. Now about the story, it was good, a bit short, but still to the point. Thanks for writing it. BTW, when I got out of the army I married the girl I was engaged to and we have been together for 43 years.
hot but....way too short,you didn't give enough space to flesh out the characters, other than the basic plot, you rushed thru it. i thought there was good possibilities with your story though. not a winner though.
I spent 17 yrs in the Army. I was never sent home during Christmas mand I spent many Christmases listening for gunshots or booms. I even spent part of one Christmas Eve in the Chaplain's tent telling him that Christmas and "Peace on Earth and Goodwill to man was a farce.
I am also crying over the guys and gals sent to the Middle east to fight a battle for the profittiers who are making a fortune from their efforts.