by MoGalsMan
A very nice story. Some of the grammar was distracting (multiple commas and misspelled words for example) but it was a truly romantic story.
That was a pretty unusual story but being the softy that I am by the time I was done reading I was crying my eyes out. Really well written and totally unexpected.
I didn't forsee the ending - which made it all the better. True wet-eye stuff. Loved it.
Lukas
Oh, I love the romance plus sexuality, plus the esoteric aspect.
Hope you will write more!
What is preading? My dictionary did not list it.
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