by Hubee
I still love this story! Plus you are a master at the whole "first person-present tense". Would love to hear more on this perhaps?
I 'really' enjoyed this read. It's very poignant and calls to my inner nature. I have felt both sides of this conflict and I enjoy all the feelings it has elicited. You should write some more. :)
Thanks for the great read.
kit
Even in it's brutality, it's beautiful. I hope you'll continue?
that was intense and beautiful, despite the nature of the story. i was delighted!
This was the perfect marriage of the "beast" mindless brutality and the most awesome sex. I really enjoyed it.
I love this story it's freaking awesome! I think I must have heard it at lest 11 times already. Your awesome! Make sure to keep writing!
the passion is so evident! the beauty of how they find each other, and that is now what they want to live for is so beautifully romantic. i absolutely adore the "fuck" scene, and then can so graciously appreciate the love/lust/care that goes into their love-making later. is he really killed? how gut-wrenching! but, does make for incredible story-telling. you are extremely talented with words!
great story...until it is ruined in the end....there is that part in me that wants the sweet ending....jeez!
That was a beautiful story but how could you do that? How could you end it like that! Damn I want my happy ending!!!!! I feel cheated he should have changed her so they could be together forever ending both their loneliness. Sigh.
..perfect ending! I am so glad to have found your writing!
that stays with you for a while after you read it.
I loved it - yes, yES, YES!
Thanx~