All Comments on 'I'll Never Leave Your Side'

I thought this was beautiful and can only hope to find the same some day

I liked your story. You could give us a little more background on the characters to make us a little more at easy to why they are who they are. A proofread might find a few of the wrong words being used but there are not any glaring problems with them. Sometimes it makes you stop reading as the words don’t fit.<P>You do write well and thank you for the entertainment<P>PT

A little disjointed but a nice premise like to see more of your work I think that you can do better and maybe even rewrite it a little but all in all not to bad.

Loved this story absolutely one of the best, like that you let character's from you're other story visit.

Keep writing this is good...

Great story line, but the spelling errors are painful. They ruin what could be an amazing story.

Mettle, you need the word metal. Mettle is someone's character.

Sent. A letter is sent, you need to use scent, as in her scent was intoxicating.

To. I'm going to a destination, You should have used too. If in doubt, use the word also

This is by no means a complete list. You did use metal correctly as in metal detector.

Please avail yourself of the volunteer editors and clean up your story. I noticed some typos too.