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All Comments on 'I'm Not Part of Your World Anymore'

by Originalribenababy

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Nice

First story but I'm not sure if it belongs in Non-Human. I thought it was more erotic coupling. Regardless it is a really nice first story and I want to wish you luck w/your next one.

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
WHAM BAM THANK YOU MA'AM

and I must be off to see a wizard. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Nice first story, but I think it belongs in erotic couplings

OriginalribenababyOriginalribenababyabout 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks..

Thanks for the comments. It was submitted as 'erotic couplings' but must have got changed in the process - I suggested I wasn't quite sure where to put it.

It is definetly about 2 humans though!

Not my first story, but it is my first 'one shot'. Really appreciate the feedback

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