by Spanish_Laura
This needs a sequel! Well written but I was anticipating a titfuck scene. Nevertheless, this is a fantastic read!
I'm really grateful for all the feedback I got on this submission. As it was my first one I was a bit apprehensive about how it would be received, so thank you for the encouragement!
Thanks for a very erotic and sensual story. Very passionate!
Mr_Neb
That was
A) ridiculously sexy,
and
B), kinda cute, in the "Couples being a couple, no need to explain the details" sort of way.
I'm surprised how much you pulled off without giving any details of name, what anyones job was, dinner, etc... does a good job of making it so that anyone can imagine themselves in the fantasy (as opposed to the "more specific" stories, which can be cool... but also risk breaking reader immersion.)