by adrammalech
Well done!
You sure left it open for more chapters, So please keep it up
Thanks!
Thornton
I really liked your start. I look forward to seeing where you go with Isaac, his new body, future as a breeder and his relationship with Nall. Please continue.
I don't usually bother to comment but you deserve it. Talented writing, clever dialog, interesting characters, believable sci-fi, and an addicting plot. With some hot sex scenes to boot! Please keep up with the series. My request is to play more with the seductive nature of the powers and not let her just instantly force him into action. Good stuff!
I just have to say I am very interested in reading the rest! { Hell I have to leave a comment! Not enough readers will!]