All Comments on 'Impromptu Attraction Ch. 04'

Just lovely!

a perfect ending for what has been a really great story!

i look forward to reading a lot more of your work!

and ending that was not drawn out or cliche , and some of his family deserve short stories themselves as you have made them out to be great fun

Very honest and real. It didn't seem like a story at all, just a look into someone's life. Well done, I enjoyed it.

thank you for a wonderful story. :)

I'm really loving the story! I hope you update soon

this story is simply awesome! there's just so much happiness. And ben is just so adorable. I love the chemistry, the characters and the o-so-cute moments. Really love this story. Its one of the bests on this site. Hope you write again sometime. :D

I was just looking for something to do on a relatively boring afternoon. Thank goodness I stopped in here. This is my first time leaving a comment on any of the chapters, and I simply could not allow myself to leave this heartwarming tale without assuring you that your characters are well developed and that the dialogue and story line flowed quite smoothly. I am definitely marking this under my favorites, and will look forward to reading it again, many times in the future. Bravo, and please continue writing. You definitely have talent.

this story is my favorite in all of literotica.

so many writers on here stick the landing. the ending to this was perfect in every way.