by citydweller
You write well, and build the scene at a good pace, but there's not much story here. I'll be curious to see what you write next.
I have previously been the model in a nude photoshoot and I have to say I really enjoyed it. I answered an advertisement in a magazine for a model prepared to model in sports wear but one thing led to another and I ended up naked and then hard and then jacking myself off while the camera clicked away. Afterwards the photographer who was just 20 and I (28) had wild sex.