All Comments on 'Impurity Ch. 01'

but you're all over the place here. Is he going to do the sister, her friend or his new girlfriend? Stick to a theme long enough to develop something and things may work out. If you continue like this the story won't go anywhere.

i agree all over the place and the tag line says he gets interested in his sister yet you never got to that part keep better track of your stories and use an editor from now on

I enjoyed the first chapter, polo_mark. Can't wait to read more!

This is possible one of the best Incest novel I have read, and I'm a professor of English at Kings. I think your incest stories are really good and humorous Polomark. I really think you should consider writing professionally Polomark. If you ever need any advise or assistant, just ask, I will send you my personal email address.

A wise man once told me something that I think has grave relevance to your story.

" NUMBER 11, Your wife is now infertile"

why do they do that?