All Comments on 'In Awe of a Young Man Ch. 03'

very end of page one looks like something is missing?? a word or a sentence???

some writing ability but your lack of attention to detail makes your story a real chore to get through. Find an editor... perhaps that will help.

you do bounce about a bit and it makes reading a bit hard. As for the oh richard I'm Pregnant . What a surprise end to the chapter NOT. Saw that coming 20,000 words ago.

But still passable reading

I thought this series was fantastic. Not the least because it mirrored in so many ways my own relationship with my aunt when I was 17. She too resisted at first, but soon was a very willing partner in our incestuous relationship. I fucked her many times and she taught me much about a woman's needs. My uncle knew about us and accepted it freely, he was a very willing cuckold. I didn't make my aunt pregnant though, unlike your story. xx Ken

Cat, Insest stories are one of my least favourite on Lit, apart from yours!

I really enjoyed this one and rank it amongst the best you have written, and thats saying something!

I look forward to your next story or installment.

Well done, keep up the good work, you know that I and many others really enjoy your style of writing. I wish i could be half as good.

Will

Thrilling, erotic and sexual, and the rape scene was done well.

I thought that the whole story was very nicely presented.

I like the ending and it was very excited about her being pregnant, that was the crowning piece.

Thanks for the good read.

Very very good story.she is the type of blood auntie who most of us would like to have ,not oly for fucking but also for loving her and being loved by her.I climaxed a nd time when she told her husband that she was pregnant.We all have guessed,that after these wild and hot fucking sessions and the"tons"of sperm the lad poured into his beloved aunt's vagina,Glenn aws the father.Having a 4th chapter on their relation,after she got the baby, would be fantastic.Hats' off to Catmoore and Glenn.

You really need to find someone to edit your stuff. You go from third person to first person several times. It's annoying.

So is the fact that you think "taught" means "taut." (You should look these up.)

Poor writing is not sexy. It's a complete turn-off.

June, in Memphis

Sublime and exciting incest story.I shall never forget the first day i was fucked by my sister's son 10 yrs ago I was 46(married with 3 children aged 20,18 & 15) and he 17.the last time i saw him,he was 11 yrs old when his parents came on holidays from Australia.6 yrs after,they came back to stay.Michael was then 16 and had become a 5 ft 11 beautiful youngster with an athletic body.when i saw him at the airport,i got a terrible thrill when i saw how much he had changed and my panty got wet to my amazement!!!That was the 1st time i had such a sensation.incredibly,when i made love with my husband in the night,i climaxed thinking Michael sucking and fucking me.i was so wild that he asked me afterwards why i got so horny!of course,i could not tell him the real reason thereof!during 1 year i cock teased Michael by my jokes and looks at his marvellous body and very often i noticed his hard ons but he would not dare to make a bold step on me.I then thought that i had to take the 1 st step!unexpectedly but fortunately, on one Sunday day,when i went at his place, all his family, except him,had gone out to an outing for the day.when i entered the house,after the door closed,i looked at him in the eyes and told me"Michael darling i know u want me,don't you?"he was speechless and i frechkissed him ,grabbed his big hard on and then he finally said"Oh Auntie,YES YES YES!I WANTED U THTE FIRST TIME I SAW U AT THE AIRPORT!!I IMMEDIATELY TOOK OFF MY CLOTHES AND HIS ALSO AND HE FINGERED ME.I WAS SO WET.WE MADE A 69 POSITION ON THE SOFA AND I WAS IN HEAVEN.HE THEN FUCKED ME LIKE A MONSTER AND I CAME AND CAMEiT WAS MARVELLOUS nd he came twice in my hot pussy and i climaxed around 10 times!!this was a record for me.Since then we fuck,whenever,we know that we shall be alone at our homes.VERY OFTEN,WHEN OUR FAMILIES MEET,I DON'T PUT ANY PANTY.Sometimes my panties are in his pocket!!We have never been caught.we cannot break though he is now married.i am sometimes jealous when i see his wife cuddling him.but that's life!!i have to accept it,

cant say much here...... as im totally lost 4 words Cat, (i really mean that) will read more of ur stories though MMMmmmmmmmmmm

no need to tell you to continue you hold be working on the next chapter because this do read true?

To a really good story! Thanks for writing! 5 Stars.

GL

I love the psychological side of our stories, the mental battles and anguish that you describe, but it all gets dragged down by your lack of pride in the finished product. Grammar and spelling mistakes become such a detractor.

As others have suggested, your work would go up a notch or two if you got an editor to clean it up, if you can't or don't want to do it yourself.

great story almost the same as me and my aunt.the pregnant part was an ending i didnt expect.there could be another series of stories for that one to be developed.

Very interesting read but a little drawn out. Hope you can write more stories like this but much shorter. Good job!

So good and I loved the last line.